Won't Stop for Anyone

Poblem fixed! After hooking up my monitor with a better cable and employing my new best friend, Photoshop CS5, I could finally see the problem and correct it. Yay for updated technology!

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It's finally finished. Really this shouldn't have taken me that long, but just as I was doing the final save before I submitted to dA... ArtRage crashed. I -almost- died. Luckily I found a copy of the file on my backup hard drive, but I lost about half my work.... sooooo yeah. O_O

So the motive behind this came from several sources, not the least of which being a undesirable trend I've noticed in my gallery - everything is so static. I really need to experiment with motion and energy. This was one attempt, but I'm not totally satisfied - therefore, I would love some serious critique please! (I don't have the fancy button, but I'm still asking okay?) If you have any thoughts on improvement in this area, I'm all ears - along with whatever other suggestions you may have. Also, if you know an artist on dA or off who you believe demonstrates motion in an interesting way, I hope you'd share . Thank you!

The general concept for this image came while listening to a random CD that someone left in my car... "Glamour of the Kill" is the name of the band I believe.
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Photoshop Elements, ArtRage + tablet, too many hours
Textures by me
Ref image for face by ~Sparklezdtr, found here --> [link]